Survival of the Fresher

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The letter written by Lauren Haworth to her long life friend in http://jcvarsity.blogspot.com/ though it is supposed to be a very personal letter to somebody she has known for ages, it is not very personal, it is like a parent talking to a child and the relationship is far from being a friendship but rather an older person giving a child advice. This might be made by the fact that Lauren is now wiser and older and can now see her old mistakes and that she wants to correct them by pointing them out to her younger self, but the problem with this is that it is going to seem as if they are not friends with the person who she is supposed to know, I believe that she should have used a more informal tone to address this very serious issue.

This letter is similar to mine in that we both warn our younger selfs against things that could go wrong even though I took the memory lane root, meaning that I reminded my younger self about the things that he did at the beginning of the year and pointed out that it was not really necessary to stress like that, this is in http://sofru.blogspot.com/. Our letters are different in that I remind my younger self at what he did at the beginning of the year and show how I have learnt from the past mistakes and show that it was very ridiculous to behave like that, but Lauren on the other hand takes the root of a bigger sister advising a person who still needs to come to university, she points out the evils of first year and how they can be over come.

By Sam of the Survival of the Fresher blog at: http://sofru.blogspot.com/

posted by Sam at 11:24 PM >1 comments

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